Have to do this one in code tags. Written a few days ago. Hope to here some good feedback yet again. Don't look too deep though, lucid and simple is key.
Ode to a Centipede
Last night in a
drunken
haze
I spotted a
c
e
n
t
i
p
e
d
e
passively creeping on the den of
my
tub. After some
struggle
I captured the ferocious beast
(shielding my hands with a
Kleenex tissue)
and threw it down into the
abyss
rapidly flushing the blue-dyed water
preventing all escape. Mind at ease, I settled for the
night.
Awakened by a steady pressure
I quickly ran to the bathroom,
and what do I see!?
My rival
my enemy
the persistent beast was swimming in the blue-dyed water
waiting for me.
(Persistence: I don't know what it was,
maybe its will to live was stronger than mine…)
The shock was unnerving – I almost
lost it.
(deep breath one; deep breath two)
Collected, the solution like pressure burst in my mind.
I opened the pajama pant fly,
aimed
and relieved. The beast had no chance,
hit square on the head
(more or less)
with a sound stream of amber colored liquid waste.
The now green colored water swallowed it whole:
dreams
desires
and all.
Death by piss, what a nasty way to go.
