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« on: September 14, 2005, 07:54:45 PM »
It's not up for discussion
Your decsion is wrong
What do you deserve
But hateful fist?

Nothing to gain
Nothing to lose
I don't give a fuck about you
I don't give a fuck about you

Pumped up and let down
Back into the void
Spiral down in your misery
Sick, twisted bitch

Nothing to gain
Nothing to lose
I don't give a fuck about you
I don't give a fuck about you
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kermi3

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« Reply #1 on: September 14, 2005, 08:22:55 PM »
Interesting, though I was wondering what your connection with the title is.  The fist line makes me feel that the poem is about beating, but the title says killing.  Which did you intend?
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govtcheez03:  i kind of look for it - i seek out stupidity and annoy it until it either gets better, gets banned, or goes away on its own

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« Reply #2 on: September 14, 2005, 09:43:53 PM »
Death of romance perhaps.
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« Reply #3 on: September 14, 2005, 09:53:37 PM »
gotcha...nice, I see it....well written.
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govtcheez03:  i kind of look for it - i seek out stupidity and annoy it until it either gets better, gets banned, or goes away on its own

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« Reply #4 on: September 14, 2005, 10:56:39 PM »
written in about 1 min though! more lyrics to a song (as are most of my musings).  but thanks man :)
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