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Entertainment & Artistry => Words => Topic started by: Jake on October 01, 2005, 01:47:17 AM

Title: She controlled the sun
Post by: Jake on October 01, 2005, 01:47:17 AM
this is basically an image. I'm don't think I've captured it well enough though; what do you guys think?

She Controlled the Sun

Red signals begun to shine as
your train approached. Angry
clouds up above sending wetness
down below.

Busy-body people, covering from
the rain: black, gray, and tan
umbrellas spring and flood the
street. Yours –  the solitary yellow
one
sprouts from the sea of dull.

Hey, is there room for me beneath
the shelter of your
sun?