Author Topic: dear friend,  (Read 3104 times)

Jake

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dear friend,
« on: October 01, 2005, 01:49:12 AM »
well, the poem basically says it all....

Dear Friend,

As promised, here is my new poem:

These words of worlds of words break out,
run, and guide my unwilling hand through
Twenty-two years and some rotations of the
moon,
exactly since it started writing me, my
heart, my
soul.

Now when I write them;
Now that you read them;
I'm afraid it might still be quite too
soon.
Do not follow where the path may lead. Go instead where there is no path and leave a trail.

ahluka

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dear friend,
« Reply #1 on: October 20, 2005, 03:55:19 PM »
Sorry for my ignorance, but why do you do that newline... thing.
I find it harder
to read when
you
do
it,
or is it just something about
poems that
I don't know
?

:)

Jake

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dear friend,
« Reply #2 on: October 20, 2005, 11:02:34 PM »
Quote from: ahluka
Sorry for my ignorance, but why do you do that newline... thing.
I find it harder
to read when
you
do
it,
or is it just something about
poems that
I don't know
?

:)


look at the third post in this thread: http://www.forums.entropysink.com/showthread.php?t=1122
Do not follow where the path may lead. Go instead where there is no path and leave a trail.