>>although I don't quite agree with your message and sentiment.<<
I'm interested that you say this - care to expand?
>>maybe instead of "hands on the throat" follow your "charge" thought, and use something just as effective but related to an army's charge.<<
Well I kind of took it as a "one man army", but that's not entirely clear.
>>btw, was your avatar matched to this poem<<
Never thought of the connection TBH.