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Jake

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She controlled the sun
« on: October 01, 2005, 01:47:17 AM »
this is basically an image. I'm don't think I've captured it well enough though; what do you guys think?

She Controlled the Sun

Red signals begun to shine as
your train approached. Angry
clouds up above sending wetness
down below.

Busy-body people, covering from
the rain: black, gray, and tan
umbrellas spring and flood the
street. Yours –  the solitary yellow
one
sprouts from the sea of dull.

Hey, is there room for me beneath
the shelter of your
sun?
Do not follow where the path may lead. Go instead where there is no path and leave a trail.