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Jake

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new story
« on: November 02, 2005, 08:57:25 PM »
I've recently written a short story for my english class. Actually it is an elongated version from a two page story I wrote a few months back. I'd like to know what you guys think about it :) all comments/critiques greatly appreciated :thumbsup:

pdf version

word version

thanks.
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