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Entertainment & Artistry => Words => Topic started by: Jake on September 16, 2005, 11:28:59 AM

Title: A suicide story
Post by: Jake on September 16, 2005, 11:28:59 AM

a little bit of an experiment. Let me know what you think :)

Title: A suicide story
Post by: Ken Fitlike on September 16, 2005, 11:36:30 AM

That's quite readable, axon. I liked the first version/perspective most but it's very interesting to follow your exploration of the experience through the other viewpoints.

Title: A suicide story
Post by: drakkenkorin on September 16, 2005, 03:18:17 PM

and why did you use "worm" instead of "warm"  typo or foreshadowing?

Title: A suicide story
Post by: Jake on September 16, 2005, 03:29:00 PM

typo :(