Author Topic: http://www.zkwarta.com  (Read 11069 times)

phpdood

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« on: May 03, 2005, 04:36:32 PM »
Could you guys check out my website and honestly let me have it?

http://www.zkwarta.com

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« Reply #1 on: May 03, 2005, 05:00:15 PM »
My biggest complaint would be that the text in the banner is a little hard to read with the blurred image behind it. If it were shadowed or outlined it would be easier to read.

and if you want me to be really picky. The content on the main page looks great, the layout is nice, and the images really liven things up. With this in mind, switching to the "About" or "Services" page is a bit of a let down because its bland, straight up text. Im actually a big fan of bland straight up text but in this situation some type of imagary or colour could help (thumb nails of example pages for services? i dont know)

Also, i didn't really notice the menu at the top at first. I think its because of the size of the banner.... or maybe its just me ;)

nice design overall.

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« Reply #2 on: May 03, 2005, 05:11:18 PM »
Overall it is pretty good, but the banner image is fuzzy at best.  The rest of the site is pretty crisp and sharp, but it's like you reduced it so far down that it looks bad.  And it could be smaller too.

The rest of the site is pretty good... I like the colors and the layout, but I have to agree that I didn't notice the navigation right away.

You also have some minor validation errors.

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« Reply #3 on: May 03, 2005, 05:54:30 PM »
thanks guys,
I'll be on it like a hobo on a ham sandwich.

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« Reply #4 on: May 03, 2005, 06:14:13 PM »
I'm not a designer, but it looks pretty good here (agree about the menu though).