I want the reader to see what I see...
I'm not sure I wanted the first two lines to rhyme, besides I find it harder to write if I'm constantly trying to think of a word which rhymes with X.
I got the first line from the raindrops on the window, and the second from the condensation, and the next three from other raindrops "pushing" the pearls down. Looking back over it the second verse (is this the right word?) is a bit all over the place - the first two lines are pretty complimentary of each other (they describe the trees and fields in the distance) but the next two lines don't really add much to the scene. I think I need to change those.
I was looking at the rooftops of my neighbors when writing the 3rd verse (?) and I feel it ends the poem abruptly - sort of unfinished. For some reason I think I felt obligated to include the title of the poem in the poem itself... I shouldn't do that.
Hmm...