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Entertainment & Artistry => Words => Topic started by: Jake on November 02, 2005, 08:57:25 PM

Title: new story
Post by: Jake on November 02, 2005, 08:57:25 PM
I've recently written a short story for my english class. Actually it is an elongated version from a two page story I wrote a few months back. I'd like to know what you guys think about it :) all comments/critiques greatly appreciated :thumbsup:

 pdf version  (http://www.amphoricdream.com/faith/ill_faith.pdf)

 word version  (http://www.amphoricdream.com/faith/ill_faith.doc)

thanks.