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« on: April 23, 2005, 12:28:13 AM »
I dont write that much, honestly because i think i suck at it. The only other one i remember making public is the one axon has/had i wrote when my ex laur was in a car accident. Not long ago i wrote one when she left me, found it and figured fuk it ill post it.

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Lost and lonely, your grip has gone cold
Used to feel your touch, left the burn of loss
One time you were there for me, me for you
Expected no change ahead, imagine my suprise

You dealt me a dirty hand
A true dealer of pain
I see you in the shadows, attached at his wrist
I hope the new serves you well
You'll do upon him as you did me
Fool doesnt see it coming, deep inside you know
Soon he'll walk the same alley you led me too
He'll walk it lost and lonely
You'll go for another soul
hey ethic if you and i were both courting lily allen..... oh wait, which one of us has a relationship that lasted more than the bus ride home?

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« Reply #1 on: April 23, 2005, 03:37:44 AM »
>>Soon he'll walk the same alley you led me too
He'll walk it lost and lonely<<

That's a great line right there.
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« Reply #2 on: April 23, 2005, 01:03:55 PM »
thnx, axon if u still ahve that other one can u put it up for me?
hey ethic if you and i were both courting lily allen..... oh wait, which one of us has a relationship that lasted more than the bus ride home?

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« Reply #3 on: April 23, 2005, 01:36:05 PM »
Sounds more like a song than poetry.

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« Reply #4 on: April 25, 2005, 01:31:26 PM »
hey RoD, I'm glad you're writing :)

here is RoD's poem he wrote some time ago after his girlfried had a pretty serious car accident - he was in a lot of shock so forgive the grammar/spelling mistakes :p.

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The day I got it all, again
Steven Billington

The day went dark,
Something is wrong.
My heart feels heavy,
My heart turns numb.

Suddenly breaking the tension,
The sound of her fathers voice.
Like a dagger to soul,
The sharp words ring out.
Lauryn was in an accident.

The tears i push back,
The question i dare not ask.
Is she ok?
I choke the words so low,
Did i say them at all?

She's stable he says,
What does that mean?
My worlds crashing down,
I need air i cannot breathe.

Hours go by, the time it goes so slow,
So many questions, wonders,
Someone has to know!

My angles face,
The woman of my life, my love,
Her tender beauty, obvious to sight,
Masked by this devil given glove,
Of injury.

How dare the forces,
Of the heaven to which i pray,
Let this happen to my Lauryn, on this tragic,
Sorrowfull day.

This heaven i wish to curse,
My fury they should know,
The thought to my mind creeps,
It could have been worse.

My anger to heaven i dismiss,
Like this she ended up, but her life,
God did spare.

Thank you god,
You brought me my eternal love.
The best thing of all you did today,
You brought her to me again.

This chance i shall not waste,
Her every wish will be fullfilled.
I love my angel so much, The second chance to prove
Will never go to waste.

Our love so true, I need her lord,
I can never thank you for this,
My life i will spend to try.

I love you Lauryn, theres no-one
Or nothing, that i need more.
With you i will forever stay, This i swear to you,
Each and every day.

Get well soon love, the road will be long,
Each step i will walk with you, If
You let me come along.
Do not follow where the path may lead. Go instead where there is no path and leave a trail.

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« Reply #5 on: April 30, 2005, 11:42:18 PM »
then the bitch cheated on me with her ex while she was supposed to be in physical therepy. She was getting physical, alright.
hey ethic if you and i were both courting lily allen..... oh wait, which one of us has a relationship that lasted more than the bus ride home?